View Single Post
  #46 (permalink)  
Old March 29th, 2008
soltakss's Avatar
soltakss soltakss is offline
RQ Fogey
 
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Birmingham, UK
Posts: 524
Default

The stats look fine. Physically and mentally they seem about right.

The skills look a bit high. Are they basic skills or are they for "normal" Tree Children?

Are the spells generic from the BRP Rulebook or are they spells that you have made up? The names of the spells don't really work for me. The spells don't really have any flavour, you couldn't tell they were Waelding or Forest Magic from the names. Even changing the names from "Sorcerer's" to "Forest" would be a start, so you'd have Cloak of Green, Forest Leap, Forest Sureness, Forest Speed, Forest Armor, Sharp flame, Make Fast, Forest Ear and Forest Eye.

As for having the stats in a Code section, it looks OK. I've also put them in tables but I'm not at all sure that it looks any better.

It would probably look better if the Weapons were pulled out to be below the stat block and above the skills, but that's the classic RQ layout. I've also included a sample Hit Location table, but I don't have the BRP rules so I haven't got the correct values. It's only an example after all.
__________________
Simon Phipp

Wallowing in my elitism since 1982.

Never in a million years / 420


Many Systems, One Family

RQ/BRP Site (Not much BRP at the moment) www.soltakss.com/index.html
Reply With Quote